"It is a
ballad about" → "A
ballad, the song is about"
"and marks a musical departure" → "and marked a musical departure"
The music video sentence should be the last one of the para instead
"The track was nominated for" → "The song was nominated for"
"was later covered by Mexican norteño band
Conjunto Primavera and by" → "was later covered by both
Conjunto Primavera and" removing the singer introduction as well as the band one, as neither is notable for the lead when they've been used in the body
"for her 12th and final studio albums" → "for her 12th and final studio albums," plus add the release year in brackets and a comma afterwards
"Rivera recorded a music video" → "She recorded a music video"
Wikilink
Monitor Latino on ref 28 and cite as the sole publisher instead
Remove work/website from refs 32 and 33, plus wikilink the publisher for ref 32
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; my first review for you in over a month! --
K. Peake 20:56, 18 April 2021 (UTC)reply
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Kyle Peake: Pretty easy stuff, got most of it done. Only thing I didn't change was the charts table. I don't feel comfortable removing the charts for the original version. Is there maybe a way we could put charts for both the original and the cover versions somewhere in the article?
Erick (
talk) 01:00, 19 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Magiciandude You could use different chart captions for tables, like on "
Selah". Also, charts should be after cover versions since all the sections with prose are supposed to come first. --
K. Peake 06:04, 19 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Kyle Peake How does it look? I forgot to mention that I changed the genre on the infobox to "Latin pop" per Allmusic's review of the album.
Erick (
talk) 13:11, 19 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Magiciandude The charts table looks fine, but remove or replace the genre since AllMusic sidebar is not reliable for this info. --
K. Peake 17:31, 19 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Kyle Peake, Oh, I'm actually referring to the actual review of the album, not the sidebar (which I never use), specifically this part: "this 1996 release is primarily a collection of romantic Latin pop."
Erick (
talk) 17:42, 19 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Magiciandude This is acceptable sourcing since it says the album is primarily this genre, but write out in prose that musically the song is a
Latin pop song or something like that... --
K. Peake 17:46, 19 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Closest I could find was Billboard's John Lannert calling the album a "Mexican-flavored pop record" which I've added to the article, but I've removed the genre from the infobox for now.
Erick (
talk) 18:29, 19 April 2021 (UTC)reply
Magiciandude✓Pass now, but I removed the record sentence since it lacks focus on the song plus a genre is not a necessity. --
K. Peake 20:46, 19 April 2021 (UTC)reply