16:2816:28, 14 June 2024diffhist+4
Poll tax (Great Britain)
→Political consequences: Copy editing. Changed the word order in the last sentence to show more clearly that we have switched from describing a victory for the Conservatives to describing a defeat for Labour.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
16:1416:14, 14 June 2024diffhist−26
Poll tax (Great Britain)
→Opposition: Removed "(when read left-to-right)". Of course when read right-to-left they spelled out "xat llop on", but that isn't very important, and we expect to read in the ordinary direction unless told otherwise.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
06:1506:15, 14 June 2024diffhist−44
Boeing New Large Airplane
→History: Copy editing - removed an unsourced assumption. (Yes they cancelled it, but we can't say they cancelled it for the purpose of working on stretch 747s unless we can prove that exact thing.currentTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
23:4623:46, 13 June 2024diffhist+21
Campbell Soup Company
→Health issues: Moved the last sentence about salt, so that instead of sitting by itself at the end of the section it is with the rest of the salt information. This interrupts strict chronology, but is a big improvement for logic, especially since that sentence describes a result of the others in its subtopic.currentTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
23:0723:07, 13 June 2024diffhist0
Devizes Plot
"Mass executions" doesn't need a hyphen, and is not hyphenated elsewhere in this article.currentTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
20:2420:24, 11 June 2024diffhist+32
Funk
→Harmony: Changed some wording to fit obvious facts; the chorus of "Play That Funky Music" moves into the key of G, and also includes several other different chords that are not vamps or passing chords.currentTags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit
08:1108:11, 11 June 2024diffhist−6
Identity politics
There is no unlived experience. There is no died experience. Experience is experience.Tags: Mobile editMobile web editAdvanced mobile edit