14:5214:52, 21 July 2010diffhist+67
Wavy Gravy
Improve lead section. Lead is a summary of article and the notable facts of the subject. Also adding subsections. Removed the term "rather unorthodox" as subjective opinion
13:4613:46, 21 July 2010diffhist−218
Wavy Gravy
Fixing inline citations to be more exact(exact title of document) and reducing ffrom three to one the cite that best matches sentence"official clow"n of the GD"