18:2118:21, 29 May 2024diffhist−62
Shawne Fielding
Rm {{expand German}} template as not (currently) useful/appropriate. I see little in the German article that's not already here in English, and the DE sources aren't significantly better than ours. We also have more length (26,027/13,724) and more refs (83/45).
17:3717:37, 29 May 2024diffhist+163
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Dionne quintuplets
Infobox: Format lists as lists; order by death date (as mentioned on Talk). EL: fix id usage in {{IMDb title}}, add the other four sisters (why just Annette?) using {{IMDb name}}
21:1821:18, 10 May 2024diffhist−462
Xiaomi
Undid GF revision
1222587670 by
JArthur1984 (
talk); whatever the unexplained term"national champion corporations" means, it's not mentioned anywhere in the article's body, of which the lede is supposed to be a summary of the main points.Tag: Undo
14:5714:57, 9 May 2024diffhist−10
Ronald F. Prater
First quick blast of fixes and basic clean-up. Needs much more, both in wikiprose and ref citations (incl. source quality).current
17:0917:09, 7 May 2024diffhist+607
Heat Wave (novel)
Yes, an actual source, cited as such (one-sided and self-serving though it may be). Infobox: format lists as lists. Clarify multi-layer situation somewhat in "Premise".current
14:1914:19, 6 May 2024diffhist+89
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SS Arabic (1902)
Dashes per
MOS:ENBETWEEN. Decap common terms like "first class". Reuse named ref. Periods per
MOS:CAPFRAG. Italics for ships' names (linked via handy templates). Sentence case for headings (good sources appear to *not* consistently capitalize "pledge" or "crisis".current
20:3920:39, 5 May 2024diffhist−152
Shetland Sheepdog
Infobox: Format lists as lists; Rm {{small}} formatting from already small text, per
MOS:SMALL. Rm bogus ref citing example.org. "Clem" is not part of Charlotte McGowan's last name.
MOS:CAPFRAG.
MOS:DOUBLE. Decap common nouns like "head" and "cheeks". No page number in cite to Hnilica's 600+-page book.
Script-assisted date audit and style (still dmy) fixes per
MOS:NUM
19:2119:21, 5 May 2024diffhist−83
Talk:Shetland Sheepdog
Signing unsigned, but: Rm clutter of "Personal recollections" section and more personal gushing in the "Image data" section (which has nothing to do with Williamv1138's actual image data) per
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