A user with 15,861 edits. Account created on 22 December 2005.
17 November 2018
- 11:39 11:39, 17 November 2018 diff hist +7 m Camp Fire (2018) →Wildland-urban interface discussion: If you're not going to spell out "population", at least put a period after "pop.".
- 11:38 11:38, 17 November 2018 diff hist −5 m Camp Fire (2018) →Wildland-urban interface discussion: reword
- 11:34 11:34, 17 November 2018 diff hist −13 m Paradise, California →2008 fires: Eliminate clumsy wording ("fire" used 3 times in a short sentence).
- 11:31 11:31, 17 November 2018 diff hist +1 m Paradise, California →2008 fires
- 11:30 11:30, 17 November 2018 diff hist +5 m Paradise, California →Naming: referred --> referring; is --> can be
- 11:28 11:28, 17 November 2018 diff hist −8 m Paradise, California →Naming: Removed coy "yet", which implies that some evidence for "Pair o'Dice" might *yet* be forthcoming.
2 January 2013
- 00:04 00:04, 2 January 2013 diff hist −19 Stretto Clarify, remove somewhat breezy "We talk about ...".
29 July 2010
- 04:54 04:54, 29 July 2010 diff hist −108 Chris Daly →Controversial demeanor: Removing parenthetical sentence fragment: not sure what was intended here.
- 04:52 04:52, 29 July 2010 diff hist −23 Chris Daly Undid revision 375447185 by 72.174.14.37 ( talk) Not really relevant that he didn't graduate.
28 July 2010
- 07:01 07:01, 28 July 2010 diff hist −115 Cigar Undid revision 375859197 by Cayden Ryan ( talk) -- reference was to a commercial "blog", just more SEO-grubbing.
- 06:51 06:51, 28 July 2010 diff hist +2 m Music of Hungary →Hardcore, metal: Remove lazy, sloppy usage of "&" instead of "and".
- 06:50 06:50, 28 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Music of Hungary →Hardcore, Metal: lc
- 06:45 06:45, 28 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Cello →Popular music, Jazz and Neoclassical: Why capitalized?
- 06:44 06:44, 28 July 2010 diff hist −28 Cello →Orchestral: Concision; "first chair" is so high-school, not used by orchestra players generally.
- 06:40 06:40, 28 July 2010 diff hist +4 m Cello →Sul ponticello/sul tasto: It's customary to set off translations in parentheses.
- 06:17 06:17, 28 July 2010 diff hist +89 Violin making and maintenance →Maintenance: Using chalk on pegs to correct slippage
- 06:15 06:15, 28 July 2010 diff hist −33 Violin making and maintenance →Sound post adjustment: Reformatting, rephrasing.
- 06:12 06:12, 28 July 2010 diff hist −72 m Violin making and maintenance →Sound post adjustment: "Structural sense" = meaningless; "sound is chocked"? WTF?; other cleanup.
22 July 2010
- 00:14 00:14, 22 July 2010 diff hist −683 Chris Daly →Political career: How is this (his arrest) in any way relevant to his political career? This may be appropriate elsewhere in the article, but not here.
- 00:11 00:11, 22 July 2010 diff hist −85 Chris Daly →Early political activity: This business of never having finished college is neither here nor there for the purposes of this section. Seems just like more mud ...
- 00:05 00:05, 22 July 2010 diff hist +27 East Palo Alto, California Tag w/{{cleanup}}; article is full of just plain bad writing.
- 00:03 00:03, 22 July 2010 diff hist −277 East Palo Alto, California →Culture: Remove two non-notable sentences (there are many Major Taylor Cycling Clubs around the country).
- 00:00 00:00, 22 July 2010 diff hist −190 East Palo Alto, California →Overview: Remove badly-written sentence that doesn't belong in the lead.
21 July 2010
- 23:57 23:57, 21 July 2010 diff hist +14 m Rent control in the United States →Purpose and scope: Use actual name of Costa/Hawkins
- 22:29 22:29, 21 July 2010 diff hist +85 m Microphone →Condenser microphone: Replace reference, since USD site seemed not to be accessible.
- 22:17 22:17, 21 July 2010 diff hist +54 Microphone →Condenser microphone: Make a real reference using {{cite web}}.
- 22:07 22:07, 21 July 2010 diff hist +63 Microphone →Carbon microphone: Make a real reference; rephrase stuff re:Boudet microphone.
- 22:01 22:01, 21 July 2010 diff hist −110 m Microphone →Carbon microphone: Remove redundant stuff about Boudet microphone.
- 21:55 21:55, 21 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Richmond, California refinery: LC
- 21:50 21:50, 21 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Talk:Chevron Richmond Refinery moved Talk:Chevron Richmond Refinery to Talk:Chevron Richmond refinery: "Refinery" shouldn't be capitalized.
- 21:50 21:50, 21 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Chevron Richmond Refinery moved Chevron Richmond Refinery to Chevron Richmond refinery: "Refinery" shouldn't be capitalized.
- 21:49 21:49, 21 July 2010 diff hist 0 m Point Richmond, Richmond, California lc
- 19:49 19:49, 21 July 2010 diff hist +14 m Aaron Peskin →Personal life: More proper reference to local news crew; no need to plug local TV station.
- 19:44 19:44, 21 July 2010 diff hist +19 Aaron Peskin →Political career: Cite, pleeze?
- 18:59 18:59, 21 July 2010 diff hist −7 m Orchestra →Organization: Just a little N.B. in there about "period". Remove needless example.
- 18:51 18:51, 21 July 2010 diff hist −1 m Richard Wagner →Early stage (to 1842): Lifetime = 1 word.
- 18:48 18:48, 21 July 2010 diff hist +7 m Richard Wagner →Opera: Further copy editing for concision, punctuation (incl. real em dashes w/no spaces around)
12 July 2010
- 04:48 04:48, 12 July 2010 diff hist −15 m Martini (cocktail) →Martini origins and mixology: Remove needless "footnote" ref.
- 04:46 04:46, 12 July 2010 diff hist +59 m Martini (cocktail) →Martini origins and mixology: Replace pretend reference w/real one
- 04:34 04:34, 12 July 2010 diff hist +2 Martini (cocktail) →Martini origins and mixology: Take out incorrect capitalization, restate more succinctly.
- 04:15 04:15, 12 July 2010 diff hist −1 m Killing of Oscar Grant No buildings were destroyed that night.
- 01:48 01:48, 12 July 2010 diff hist −1,051 Richmond, California Remove business of "roughness", which is an unencyclopedic description, no matter the references.
- 01:36 01:36, 12 July 2010 diff hist −72 Oaksterdam, Oakland Mostly formatting; removing some fluff.
- 01:03 01:03, 12 July 2010 diff hist +29 N Andre grubacic Create the redirect (for Andre, rather than the proper spelling Andrej)
26 August 2009
- 06:02 06:02, 26 August 2009 diff hist +119 m Berkeley, California Better reference formatting.
- 05:55 05:55, 26 August 2009 diff hist +11 m Golden Gate, Oakland, California "Announcing"--> marking. Reword sentence (still not happy with it ...).
- 05:38 05:38, 26 August 2009 diff hist −84 m Violin No reason to italicize these words. Fix parallel sentence structure. Get rid of "he or she" nonsense.
- 05:32 05:32, 26 August 2009 diff hist 0 m Violin →Jazz: Jazz not a proper noun, not capitalized.
- 05:31 05:31, 26 August 2009 diff hist −126 Violin →External links: WTF?!?
23 August 2009
- 08:02 08:02, 23 August 2009 diff hist +4 m Fire Arts Festival Wrong stub category.
