03:0903:09, 22 December 2022diffhist−7
Yaldā Night
A reference to "Iran" was instead a broken link to "afghan people" in spite of citations and an existing reference to Afghanistan later in the sentence. Corrected the reference.Tags: RevertedMobile editMobile web edit
5 December 2022
16:0416:04, 5 December 2022diffhist−46
Ted Stevens Anchorage International Airport
→Terminals: Removed entirely irrelevant advertising for McCool Carlson Green Architects (South terminal had no such reference to who designed it, and it details about who architected it doesn't functionally provide value in this section) It could be valuable in History, but not under the functions of the terminals themselves.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
2 December 2022
15:1515:15, 2 December 2022diffhist+427
Princess Noor
Noor Pahlavi has no current royal title and was born outside Iran. clarified her heritage with a citation and removed the Princess designation, though I kept the name listed on the page as many Iranian diaspora refer to her with the honorific and believe she will claim the royal title of Princess should the Pahlavi dynasty be re-established in Iran.
07:0507:05, 24 February 2022diffhist+28
North Atlantic Treaty
→Article 4: added {{Current related|section}} to article 4 given its Feb 2022 invocation. I'll leave it to more versed people than myself to decide if {{current related}} is needed for the article.
20:4020:40, 2 October 2019diffhist−29
Me generation
Removed per removal condition 3: "In the absence of any discussion, or if the discussion has become dormant." No discussion on this page has taken place since 2017, let alone since the neutrality tag was added in July 2019.
04:0604:06, 13 April 2019diffhist−286
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Marc Benioff
Follow-up to my last edit: did away with the Forbes Best Companies citation since it seemed entirely surreptitious, especially in tandem with the second lead paragraph I just removed which duplicated the philanthropic giving section. I'll reference my two edits here in the talk page for discussion.
04:0304:03, 13 April 2019diffhist−102
Marc Benioff
Made a few edits: 1. removed the 2nd lead paragraph about philanthropic efforts to declutter the lead since it was all already covered in the relevant section, and 2. added a cited reference in Early Life back to David Benioff. In reviewing, it seems a lot of the citations have a stealth bias in them (e.g. first reference points to Salesforce's status as a best place to work, irrelevant to the point of the citation itself), which suggests this was professionally edited. I could be wrong, though.
00:1100:11, 11 September 2018diffhist+676
Naomi Osaka
Confirmed mainstream media citation of her Haitian citizenship: "When Osaka turned pro in 2013, her dual citizenship meant that she had a choice between playing for Japan or the United States. Her father chose Japan, thinking it would open up more opportunities for her." Also confirmed local Haitian source of first Haitian Citizen to win Grand Slam.