19 September 2013

• 08:58 08:58, 19 September 2013 diff hist +8‎ Isothermal microcalorimetry ‎ →‎Biology and medicine: {{fact}}. this term is a neologism invented by an editor, and he keeps trying to force it in here. the term is not used. just try searching Google.
• 08:56 08:56, 19 September 2013 diff hist −3‎ St Crispin's School ‎ →‎Architecture: the "new" ICT block (from 2005) is no longer the newest building -- even this article mentions the new science block (completed 2013)!
• 07:59 07:59, 19 September 2013 diff hist +1‎ Typepad ‎No edit summary
• 07:24 07:24, 19 September 2013 diff hist −6‎ CD Video ‎ grammar

18 September 2013

• 19:58 19:58, 18 September 2013 diff hist −1‎ Tim Follin ‎ →‎Insight Studios: misuse of verb "enthuse". you cannot "enthuse someone".
• 19:44 19:44, 18 September 2013 diff hist −1‎ Square–cube law ‎ →‎Engineering examples: bad comma
• 14:58 14:58, 18 September 2013 diff hist −2‎ Vault (drink) ‎ →‎Marketing: hyphen, tense
• 11:58 11:58, 18 September 2013 diff hist +1‎ Munchkin cat ‎ grammar
• 11:48 11:48, 18 September 2013 diff hist +3‎ Top-level domain ‎ →‎Proposed domains: grammar
• 10:47 10:47, 18 September 2013 diff hist +16‎ Isothermal microcalorimetry ‎ →‎Biology and medicine: In 2013 the term "metabolismics" was coined{{who}} {{fact}} -- this word does not appear in peer-reviewed science. who coined it? original research?
• 08:11 08:11, 18 September 2013 diff hist −34‎ In the Court of the Dragon (short story) ‎ →‎Plot summary: grammar. avoid clunky repetition of words. still needs more work.
• 08:10 08:10, 18 September 2013 diff hist −11‎ The Repairer of Reputations ‎ →‎Plot

17 September 2013

• 17:33 17:33, 17 September 2013 diff hist −12‎ Blue Wing Airlines ‎ →‎Accidents and incidents: grammar
• 13:44 13:44, 17 September 2013 diff hist −26‎ List of Top Gun video games ‎ →‎The Second Mission: fix lots of bad grammar
• 07:58 07:58, 17 September 2013 diff hist −8‎ John Redwood ‎ what is the point of "notably" in this sentence?
• 07:55 07:55, 17 September 2013 diff hist 0‎ Chinnor ‎ hyphen reqd
• 07:55 07:55, 17 September 2013 diff hist −4‎ John Redwood ‎ →‎Member of Parliament: grammar
• 06:21 06:21, 17 September 2013 diff hist +14‎ Dave (TV channel) ‎ Dave's tagline changed a while ago, from "the home of witty banter" to "the home of witty comedy banter"

16 September 2013

• 17:55 17:55, 16 September 2013 diff hist −4‎ Roadrunner ‎No edit summary
• 13:11 13:11, 16 September 2013 diff hist +1‎ Rincewind ‎ →‎Cohen the Barbarian: comma reqd
• 13:10 13:10, 16 September 2013 diff hist 0‎ Rincewind ‎ →‎Twoflower: hyphens not appropriate here.
• 13:08 13:08, 16 September 2013 diff hist −2‎ The Light Fantastic ‎ →‎Plot summary: you land on something. you don't land "onto" something.
• 10:22 10:22, 16 September 2013 diff hist +3‎ Social privilege ‎ →‎Underprivilege: typo#
• 10:00 10:00, 16 September 2013 diff hist +495‎ Talk:List of Magical Negro occurrences in fiction ‎ →‎Guinan - Star Trek TNG (1987): new section
• 09:58 09:58, 16 September 2013 diff hist −95‎ Another Night (song) ‎ →‎Lyrical content: this was a bit silly. trimming it down.
• 09:57 09:57, 16 September 2013 diff hist −41‎ Run Away (Real McCoy song) ‎ →‎Music Video: yelling is not "stereotypical capitalism"!
• 09:56 09:56, 16 September 2013 diff hist −1‎ Real McCoy (band) ‎ →‎Since the split: grammar: "this was a set", not "these were a set..."
• 07:54 07:54, 16 September 2013 diff hist +4‎ Darkinjung language ‎ →‎Revitalisation effort: italicise book title

15 September 2013

• 10:28 10:28, 15 September 2013 diff hist +5‎ Lord of the Flies (1990 film) ‎ →‎Differences between the film and the book: grammar
• 07:21 07:21, 15 September 2013 diff hist −12‎ Evergreen Terrace ‎No edit summary
• 05:55 05:55, 15 September 2013 diff hist +42‎ List of Magical Negro occurrences in fiction ‎ →‎1980s and earlier: * Guinan (Star Trek character) (1988)
• 05:22 05:22, 15 September 2013 diff hist −18‎ Boyz 4 Now ‎ →‎Plot: better phrasing
• 04:38 04:38, 15 September 2013 diff hist +1‎ Adrienne Kennedy ‎ →‎The Alexander Plays: comma reqd
• 02:53 02:53, 15 September 2013 diff hist +4‎ Inuit cuisine ‎ →‎Bowhead whale: grammar: the quotation is talking about a singular hunter
• 02:46 02:46, 15 September 2013 diff hist −6‎ Qamutiq ‎ →‎Design: grammar
• 02:21 02:21, 15 September 2013 diff hist 0‎ Earth's orbit ‎ →‎Distance Covered in an Orbit: bad caps

14 September 2013

• 12:52 12:52, 14 September 2013 diff hist +216‎ Talk:Affirmations (New Age) ‎ →‎Do they work?: new section
• 12:31 12:31, 14 September 2013 diff hist −2‎ A.1. Sauce ‎No edit summary
• 12:08 12:08, 14 September 2013 diff hist −118‎ Social isolation ‎ →‎Risk factors: that doesn't seem to make much sense

13 September 2013

• 03:13 03:13, 13 September 2013 diff hist −1‎ Qoph ‎ comma
• 01:07 01:07, 13 September 2013 diff hist +213‎ Talk:Reduced instruction set computer ‎ →‎RISC OS?: new section
• 00:18 00:18, 13 September 2013 diff hist +4‎ Deflocked ‎ →‎Tucker: remove bad hyphens. not attributive usage.

12 September 2013

• 22:57 22:57, 12 September 2013 diff hist +58‎ Coca-Cola Freestyle ‎ →‎Products: Orange Coke was also briefly sold in UK & Gibraltar. see WP's Orange Coke article.
• 22:52 22:52, 12 September 2013 diff hist +37‎ Five Guys ‎ →‎History: The second location was in Reading, Berkshire.
• 07:12 07:12, 12 September 2013 diff hist −17‎ List of sports ‎ →‎Miscellaneous sports: remove * Wicketball -- article was deleted as non-notable sport
• 07:10 07:10, 12 September 2013 diff hist +29‎ Formal trousers ‎ Eton College slang
• 07:09 07:09, 12 September 2013 diff hist +33‎ Eton College ‎ →‎Drama: Simon Dormandy left the school in late 2012
• 05:31 05:31, 12 September 2013 diff hist +3‎ Panguingue ‎ grammar. it's the card game, not its "popularity", that can be found in casinos.
• 05:29 05:29, 12 September 2013 diff hist −36‎ Tonk ‎ * Slang term for an illegal immigrant; see [https://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/tonk]. -- removed unlikely backronym explanation
• 04:49 04:49, 12 September 2013 diff hist +2‎ Speed garage ‎ typo