01:3801:38, 30 March 2022diffhist+55
Body language
Gosh… this conveyed striking info I’d not learned. Still, the wording was loose enuf too interfere with readers’ easy comprehension of the content. (That said, it was not as clumsy as my use of ‘’das Deutsch’’.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
03:4603:46, 22 March 2022diffhist+408
Isterberg
rewording, hopefully better approximating a German colleague’s intended English toneTags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
20:3020:30, 19 March 2022diffhist−10
Sanford Underground Research Facility
Fixed grammar: we don’t definitively deprecate contractions. But this “they’ll” is too clumsy and vague to merit positive mention of any exceptions to the anti-cont policy.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
04:3304:33, 16 March 2022diffhist+255
Fall; or, Dodge in Hell
Fixed grammar & style; SO SORRY, {{NOT| a book review}}, needs reveal of ending; & not hardly a minor edit… should have pushed that switch right, or left?Tags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
00:3200:32, 16 March 2022diffhist+54
Sheik
I have no idea what motivated the silly choice of article title; see talkTags: RevertedMobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
20:0420:04, 15 March 2022diffhist0
Sheik
“may also”, not “also may”: another HNWD4, but worth a shot now and thenTags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
19:1219:12, 15 March 2022diffhist+15
Sheikh (disambiguation)
“Sheik” Is the most common in the degraded American language, and surely mostly harmless as the least rare variantTags: RevertedMobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
13:3913:39, 15 March 2022diffhist+39
Von Neumann architecture
Not all these fixes correct errors, so the rest are at least partially matters of taste. Let editors of wisdom correct those I’ve screwn up, without fear of denunciation, let alone derision.Tags: Mobile editMobile web edit
15:5815:58, 13 March 2022diffhist+24
Marxian economics
tuned wording to reduce minor syntactic ambiguities in the elaborate theoretical distinctions.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit
17:3917:39, 7 March 2022diffhist+136
Optical resolution
there was nothing truly *wrong* in the version that I found, but there were so many imprecisions that very few readers would have avoided confusion by the old wording, leading to failure to absorb its intent.Tags: Mobile editMobile app editiOS app edit