7 March 2021

• 12:41 12:41, 7 March 2021 diff hist −12‎ Fionn mac Cumhaill ‎ →‎Notes: Corrected mistake Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:38 12:38, 7 March 2021 diff hist −5‎ Catalpa rescue ‎ More cleanup Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:36 12:36, 7 March 2021 diff hist +34‎ Catalpa rescue ‎ Tidy. A lot of the writing in this article is really bad Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 12:29 12:29, 7 March 2021 diff hist 0‎ John Devoy ‎ →‎Nationalist leader: Corrected error Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 February 2021

• 20:27 20:27, 27 February 2021 diff hist −18‎ Jim Leavelle ‎ →‎Portrayals: More tidying Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:23 20:23, 27 February 2021 diff hist +35‎ Jim Leavelle ‎ It didn't make sense that this sentence gave no reason for appearing in Leavelle's article and it *really* didn't make sense that the first paragraph here doesn't mention why Leavelle remains a widely-remembered figure in the Kennedy assassination story Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:14 20:14, 27 February 2021 diff hist +5‎ Jack Ruby ‎ →‎Death: Fixed a bit of not-great writing; made sure to include the timeframe between his diagnosis and death that I just removed from the previous section Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 20:10 20:10, 27 February 2021 diff hist +6‎ Jack Ruby ‎ →‎Prosecution: Doesn't make sense to have a sentence ending with "he died" right before the subsection titled "death" Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 19:50 19:50, 27 February 2021 diff hist −5‎ Grand Rapids, Michigan ‎ Pointless Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 February 2021

• 08:15 08:15, 19 February 2021 diff hist −50‎ Adepero Oduye ‎ Excised poor writing Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:56 04:56, 19 February 2021 diff hist −28‎ Parasite (2019 film) ‎ Cleanup. Like most uses of the word "also," its frequent deployment here tells the reader nothing and distracts from useful information Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 January 2021

• 17:06 17:06, 29 January 2021 diff hist −1‎ WoodSpring Suites ‎ The vowel-dependent "an" before a word starting with H is only supposed to be used when that H is silent, as in honor and hour. The H in hotel is decidedly not silent Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 January 2021

• 04:42 04:42, 24 January 2021 diff hist −168‎ God Mother ‎ →‎History: Bunch of cleanup Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

19 January 2021

• 02:09 02:09, 19 January 2021 diff hist +4‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ →‎See also: Supposed to be italics. I really want to emphasize what I said earlier so for the people in the back: Anyone who doesn't take the time to ensure their work is coherent, high-quality, and in line with policy and accordingly ends up leaving messes like this is a person doing measurable damage to this website. Such users, per WP:CIR, shouldn't be permitted to edit here long
• 02:01 02:01, 19 January 2021 diff hist −351‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ →‎Media response: Feel free to reinstate this along with a reliable, impartial source taking a stance opposite this one. See WP:NPOV Tag: section blanking
• 02:00 02:00, 19 January 2021 diff hist +408‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ And there's a reason to put that citation back in
• 01:58 01:58, 19 January 2021 diff hist +664‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ Still at this. It is absolutely ridiculous that this section didn't explain what the lawsuit is about or why this case is so high-profile
• 01:31 01:31, 19 January 2021 diff hist −166‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ Removing cite templates that are no longer needed
• 01:29 01:29, 19 January 2021 diff hist −439‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ →‎Media response: This should go into the lead, which unbelievably contains no plain-language explanation of this article's subject
• 01:27 01:27, 19 January 2021 diff hist +189‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ →‎Appeals: Removed WP:OR and rewrote for clarity; the Global News source I added is just a placeholder
• 01:19 01:19, 19 January 2021 diff hist −114‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ Still at it and dead tired of it
• 01:08 01:08, 19 January 2021 diff hist +31‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ →‎Trial proceedings: More cleanup
• 01:05 01:05, 19 January 2021 diff hist −11‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ →‎Defendants and Intervenors: More cleanup; please see MOS:HEAD
• 00:51 00:51, 19 January 2021 diff hist −775‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ →‎The plaintiffs' claim: Still underway. There's no apparent reason to include the entire list of plaintiffs, which should have had quotation marks around it anyway. A lot of this appears mostly or entirely lifted from John Steeves's decision with his words not encased in quotation marks and those constitute a policy violation per the second and third red textboxes at Wikipedia:Plagiarism#Avoiding_plagiarism
• 00:18 00:18, 19 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ →‎The plaintiffs' claim: Small edit; more to come here
• 00:17 00:17, 19 January 2021 diff hist −1,051‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ →‎Background: Still underway. Most text in this section just repeated things the reader already knows. The only new information is the nickname, which is trivia anyways Tag: section blanking
• 00:07 00:07, 19 January 2021 diff hist −85‎ Cambie Surgeries Corporation v British Columbia ‎ Cleanup underway. Adding a citation anywhere but the end of a sentence is, almost every time, a bad idea. [And you absolutely are not required to add cites immediately after the text they verify.] It's so easy not to notice problems with readability, coherence, grammar, etc. because when sentences contain long citation templates full of wiki markup, they can barely be read in the editing window

15 January 2021

• 02:22 02:22, 15 January 2021 diff hist −209‎ Depend (undergarment) ‎ Undid revision 991747084 by 2607:FA49:4E3D:D200:20F3:8721:62EA:92B6 ( talk) Removed stupid, unfunny vandalism Tags: Undo section blanking

11 January 2021

• 15:29 15:29, 11 January 2021 diff hist −11‎ Joseph L. Mankiewicz ‎ →‎Family history: American English tends not to add "the" before nouns used as descriptors like this. The word could have come before "radio and television personality Ben Mankiewicz" but, appropriately, it doesn't Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 January 2021

• 20:33 20:33, 10 January 2021 diff hist +4‎ Greedy Williams ‎ Undid revision 999515374 by 2604:2D80:E701:CB00:30DD:E534:C725:5EA6 ( talk) Greedy could use more page watchers so stupid shit like this doesn't stick for hours on end Tags: Undo changing height and/or weight

9 January 2021

• 23:23 23:23, 9 January 2021 diff hist −32‎ Esai Morales ‎ Fixed incoherent errors

7 January 2021

• 18:46 18:46, 7 January 2021 diff hist −140‎ Ezola Foster ‎ →‎2000 election: A bunch more tidying Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:31 18:31, 7 January 2021 diff hist −87‎ Ezola Foster ‎ Tidy Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:25 18:25, 7 January 2021 diff hist −102‎ James Lyons (admiral) ‎ →‎Biography: A lot more cleanup. Removed promotional material with improper WP:PRIMARY sourcing, added requisite links, fixed text re: Seth Rich that seemed to have been written by someone who didn't know anything about what happened, other tidying Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 18:10 18:10, 7 January 2021 diff hist +97‎ James Lyons (admiral) ‎ Yeah that absolutely had to be more than one sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

6 January 2021

• 05:22 05:22, 6 January 2021 diff hist −102‎ Lionsgate Premiere ‎ Tidy Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 January 2021

• 12:45 12:45, 4 January 2021 diff hist −4‎ Feminista Jones ‎ No context or explanation at all and the source is blatantly not neutral Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:07 11:07, 4 January 2021 diff hist −8‎ Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade ‎ →‎Release and reception: Fixed more errors Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 11:00 11:00, 4 January 2021 diff hist −321‎ Indiana Jones and the Last Crusade ‎ →‎Plot: Corrected many uses of the inappropriately in-universe "Indy," all of which will get undone by some dishonest person who will falsely claim, of course without reading the improved version, that "Jones" invites confusion since there are two characters with that name. The Estado Novo link came from someone so confident of their own genius that they've never read WP:NOR Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:49 04:49, 4 January 2021 diff hist 0‎ Sandra Williams (American politician) ‎ →‎Electoral history: Fixed error Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 02:28 02:28, 4 January 2021 diff hist −568‎ Virgil Abloh ‎ →‎Controversy: Undid garbage edits by User:DetongChe. That person saw fit to use this website to advertise, stole from a press release, and dump it in a section called "controversy." Save this website from thieves like that Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile web edit

3 January 2021

• 04:09 04:09, 3 January 2021 diff hist −27‎ Adrian Vermeule ‎ Undid revision 997972496 by Beyond My Ken ( talk) I agree! I said nothing different. I know that no veteran editor tolerates being reverted by an IP so this won't last but I'll reword my question in the hopes I'll get more than 5 seconds of consideration this time: doesn't calling someone "law professor" make also calling them a "legal scholar" redundant? Are there law professors who aren't legal scholars? Tags: Undo Reverted
• 03:48 03:48, 3 January 2021 diff hist −27‎ Adrian Vermeule ‎ If he's a law professor, isn't calling him a legal scholar redundant? Tags: Reverted Mobile edit Mobile web edit

2 January 2021

• 04:56 04:56, 2 January 2021 diff hist −58‎ Replication crisis ‎ In this context, "as of 2020" and "ongoing" mean the same thing. Although really they don't since it's not 2020 any more Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:50 04:50, 2 January 2021 diff hist −36‎ Clemson Tigers football ‎ Removed useless buck-passing Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:49 04:49, 2 January 2021 diff hist −636‎ Clemson Tigers football ‎ Removed more attacks although the site's refusal to preemptively protect vulnerable pages is such a permission slip that it's not really vandalism. Also did several other fixes; this highly-visible article is in unusually bad shape Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:11 04:11, 2 January 2021 diff hist −53‎ Trey Sermon ‎ Removed vandalism. They still don't preemptively protect articles, do they Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 04:10 04:10, 2 January 2021 diff hist −44‎ Trey Sermon ‎ →‎College career: Tidy Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

1 January 2021

• 15:56 15:56, 1 January 2021 diff hist −134‎ 2018 NHL entry draft ‎ Corrected error (less than 2 months does not comprise "a couple") that was also written badly. Also removed trivia Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 15:53 15:53, 1 January 2021 diff hist −186‎ 2018 NFL draft ‎ "Couple months" is both wrong (it was less than 2 months) and a weird construct. Also removed trivia Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit