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The issue at hand is not the retinal detachment, it is typically scarring and oxidative damage caused by the excess generation of free oxygen radicals. Yes, retina detachment can occur but it is a possible outcome, not the primary one. The text should simply say- he was blind due to ROP. The added detail of "retinal detachment" adds unnecessary confusion. If necessary it could say, because of excess oxygen provided at birth, but the retinal detachment is unnecessary and potentially misleading.

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This is gobbledygook: "A virtual one-man band, Wonder's use ..." If the sentence begins, "A virtual one-man band, ..." then the subject of the sentence should be "Wonder." So it should read, "A virtual one-man band, Wonder used synthesizers and other electronic musical instruments during the 1970s, reshaping the conventions of contemporary R&B." 68.237.53.122 ( talk) 16:51, 2 October 2023 (UTC) reply